So true!! Thank you for your comment Cleo!! I always appreciate you taking the time to read my crazy thoughts! This one was definitely therapy for me ;)
Every second we are closer to death. Yesterday I watched someone's seconds run out and there was nothing I could do, yet his suffering was short. Knowing one is going to die and then having to live with the suffering and pain till that day is the worst, especially when that day could be any day. I liked the poem.
Hi Phillip! I am deeply sorry for your loss. I'm always here if you need to talk. It is so true what you said...
"Knowing one is going to die and then having to live with the suffering and pain till that day is the worst, especially when that day could be any day."
Val, after reading this beautifully written poem I once again understand how miraculous words can be, and the places they can take us, (good or bad) and how an artist can express extraordinary situations and in so doing even gain power and inspiration to deal with the darkest of circumstance...this is simply a great write, honest and in the moment, with no pretense and extraordinary rhythmical qualities in the language, you display with ease a powerful poetic gift with a hard subject....I have the highest admiration for your talent, keep kicking arse and taking names, pal
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Twisted,dark,sad and true....
So true!! Thank you for your comment Cleo!! I always appreciate you taking the time to read my crazy thoughts! This one was definitely therapy for me ;)
Val ♥️
Every second we are closer to death. Yesterday I watched someone's seconds run out and there was nothing I could do, yet his suffering was short. Knowing one is going to die and then having to live with the suffering and pain till that day is the worst, especially when that day could be any day. I liked the poem.
Hi Phillip! I am deeply sorry for your loss. I'm always here if you need to talk. It is so true what you said...
"Knowing one is going to die and then having to live with the suffering and pain till that day is the worst, especially when that day could be any day."
With Love,
Val ♥️
Val, after reading this beautifully written poem I once again understand how miraculous words can be, and the places they can take us, (good or bad) and how an artist can express extraordinary situations and in so doing even gain power and inspiration to deal with the darkest of circumstance...this is simply a great write, honest and in the moment, with no pretense and extraordinary rhythmical qualities in the language, you display with ease a powerful poetic gift with a hard subject....I have the highest admiration for your talent, keep kicking arse and taking names, pal
I am always here for you baby girl!
oxoxox
Hi Valerie Lynn,
So touching, realistic in its essence, my vote
Love & hugs
Big Willy
You speak truths that most wish to ignore in such a way I doubt anyone can help but to gaze.
Thank you D Washington for reading and taking the time to leave a comment! I truly appreciate it!
Val ♥️