My dear departed Mother 💕
I stood by a rolling river and I threw a little stone thinking I was miles away from everybody, all on my own
But out of the blue I saw a reflection in the river and my blood ran cold making me all a’quiver
Of course my immediate reaction was to turn around, and yet apart from the cows in the meadow, not another creature was found
Though I was slightly scared I looked into the water once more, and Oh my goodness I almost fell on the grassy floor
Coz there was my dear departed Mother looking back at me, she had a smile on her face so obvious to see
But this was a phenomenon coz my Mother was not there, she wasn’t even in this life as I felt that chilly air
And I listened as the rivulet rippled rolling along, sounding melodious singing an ambient song
I couldn’t help myself when i whispered my Mother’s name, but then in but the blink of an eye, my vision vanished, Oh what a shame...
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wow i love this poem
i can just see you there
by the river looking
in ti wow very wonderful poem
p.s i going to read agin
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Awwwww 💕💕💕Thank you soo much it just came in my head so I wrote it in mins probably too fast xx
This is such a BEAUTIFULLY conveyed and poetic memory!!......there are moments of absolute poetic genius within ~ such as ~
~ "And I listened as the rivulet rippled, rolling along,
Sounding melodious, singing an ambient song..."
My friend, as your practice proves on these many pages of Cosmo ~ "Practice Makes Perfect".......you poetry grows in leaps and bounds.....and it is most fortunate that it chose to shine on this particular piece of subject matter.....a truly marvelous memory....marvelously painted in words!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....well done dear poet sister!!.....thanx so much JILL..... for sharing this with us all............LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Awwwww Thanking you my kind sir Tony 💕💙💕So pleased you read this & enjoyed 💕⭐️💕