My Domain
Tender steps on a frozen lake.
Overhanging boughs, dripping with leaves like rabbits ears.
Catkins arching slender branches,
their furry pods cocooningΒ a promise of spring life.
No longer any dragonflies skimming the glacial ballroom,
just a watery sun reflected in the icy stillness,
glinting spitefully at the onlooker,
to distract whatβsΒ concealed below.
A distant βVβ of geese flying majestically, in rhythm, in sync,
with a purpose sublime.
Wings boldly undulating, hypnotically, uncurious.
There is a paralyzing sense of loneliness
about a frozen lake.
A surface so serene, calm, quietly endlessβ¦
And yet
beneath..
A world trapped in prismed sunlight.
No escape into the gelid ,but life giving air.
Hidden from sight,
contained,
restrained,
suffocating.
Only ever looking upwards through the frozen layers
at theΒ cerulean sky -just beyond reach.
Tangled in reeds that constantly draw your down,
Deeper,
Darker,
Colder,
Until all light dissipates and liquid sun becomes murky night
Tender steps on a frozen lake
beware..
Walk gently,
tread softly,
lest you fallΒ beneath the surface
beyond retrieval,
to my aqueous domain.
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Comments
I really love this one Ana, you are so talented
Hi Lisa, thank you so much for being so kind!! but you are the poet I love learning from hun!! xxx
AnaΒ
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Very descriptive and well thought out!
Thank you so much Keith for your encouraging words!
Lodigiana xx
What encouraging words you have written here..they are poetic in themselves my friend! Thank you so much β₯
Lodigiana xxΒ
Brilliant work
Thank you so much Kieran really appreciate your reading and commenting
Lodigiana x
You have created a beautifully descriptive piece of work- not only painting a vivid picture of theΒ lake and surroundings butΒ by using imaginative language the reader then begins toΒ Β personifies the lake itself - a really cleverΒ thing to ! liked this a lot- your writing just gets better and better!
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Thank you so much StevieC ...that's such a kind thing to say!
Lodigiana xx
Beautiful! My head just burst with images! ? superb piece ???
Thank you so much Wayne- really appreciate it!Β
Lodigiana x
Hello Lodigiana...
ββββββAmazing how you turned a frozen Lake into a Poetic Masterpiece...
ββββββLike a Skater who makes it look like a dance floor...
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Sparrowsong,Β
Really pleased you enjoyed it. I love frozen scenery I find it's glacial stillness just awesomely inspiring !! Thank you so muchΒ for your kind wordsΒ
Hugs right back at you hun β₯β₯
Lodigiana
So beautiful .. really enjoy reading this.
Thank you so much Leah...I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Β xxx
Lodigiana