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MY FAULT

I knew right then exactly how she felt 
Like a snowman I guess about to melt
She repeated it once more just in case
Noticing the tears appear on her pretty face 

Of course it's my fault I will take the blame
How stupid I am thinking it just a game
Turn back the clock how I wish I could do 
Things would be different that's certainly true 

I will leave now unless you want me to stay
Highly unlikely from what you told me today
Nothing I can say but sorry and please forgive 
Regret what I did for as long as I shall live

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The fish of the sea

Hi Kieran sorry for leaving you to your own devices for so long, I have felt as if I haven't seen your poems in ages. This one was a contrast to your usual writes but I just wanted to let you know that it really spoke to me. Heartbreak and loss. I thi nhi k we have all been there, but your story does sound particularly tragic. It hit hard. Awesome poetry my friend 

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KIERAN1369

Hi Max 

Thanks once more for your sweet and kind supportive words of encouragement.

I hope that life is treating you well and urge you to take care and keep safe

All the best 
Kieran 

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