My First Love Letter

Here I’m to write my first love letter
To my sweet heart who insisted!
Prior to writing, I thought of using
Sweet, sweeter, no sweetest words
About her, and all about her
Importance in my life
And how much she matters me!
But when I took pen to write,
I started running short of words,
Though I had a good vocabulary.
Everytime I wrote a word
Hoping to express my feelings
Immediately I felt it lacked
The glow and lustre  and
Cut a line across it, hoping
To find a better word in place!
Hours passed by, but here I’m
Without a line written
Whatever I wrote, I was
Too busy to strike it off!
It was too short to express
My feelings for her,
To describe her beauty,
For I feared a little negligence
On my part would axe down
Our relations forever!
Finally, here I’m with my
First love letter ever to be posted!
A blank white sheet without any words
But with an impression of my lips,
“You’re too precious to be caged
In a few words of page -
You know me and my feelings for you –
I’m sure, I can’t write to you!
Here’s is her reply the next day,
With the white sheet I had sent her
With her kissing lips on my lips.
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Comments
Hi Jaison, Lovely write. I enjoyed this highly detailed piece. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
thank you Cleo for your heart out  in words
This is VERY creative P.L. Jaison!!........I love the way you wrote all about her without writing about her at all...........VERY clever my friend.........great sense of timing here as well.........and a memorable ending to wrap it up...........well done my friend.........ALL STARS..............T xo
Thank you Toni