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My First Love Letter

My First Love Letter

Here I’m to write my first love letter

To my sweet heart who insisted!

Prior to writing, I thought of using

Sweet, sweeter, no sweetest words

About her, and all about her

Importance in my life

And how much she matters me!

But when I took pen to write,

I started running short of words,

Though I had a good vocabulary.

Everytime I wrote a word

Hoping to express my feelings

Immediately I felt it lacked

The glow and lustre  and

Cut a line across it, hoping

To find a better word in place!

Hours passed by, but here I’m

Without a line written

Whatever I wrote, I was

Too busy to strike it off!

It was too short to express

My feelings for her,

To describe her beauty,

For I feared a little negligence

On my part would axe down

Our relations forever!

Finally, here I’m with my

First love letter ever to be posted!

A blank white sheet without any words

But with an impression of my lips,

“You’re too precious to be caged

In a few words of page -

You know me and my feelings for you –

I’m sure, I can’t write to you!

Here’s is her reply the next day,

With the white sheet I had sent her

With her kissing lips on my lips.

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Hi Jaison, Lovely write. I enjoyed this highly detailed piece. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.

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PL Jaison

thank you Cleo for your heart out  in words

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Tony Taylor

This is VERY creative P.L. Jaison!!........I love the way you wrote all about her without writing about her at all...........VERY clever my friend.........great sense of timing here as well.........and a memorable ending to wrap it up...........well done my friend.........ALL STARS..............T xo

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