Poem -
My Frozen Lake
For decades
I have
Known
What
Drives
Me,
Centers
Me,
To
The
Fragile
Surface
In
Which
I
Stand
Cool Breeze
Whispers
An
Echo
To
What
My
Inner
Voice
Believes
Shivering
I
See
My
Reflection
Transparent
To
Nature's
Mirror
Above
Is
Life
Below
No
Mortal
Can
Survive
To
Cross
You must
Not
Run
Walk
Slowly
Look
And
Soak
In
Everything
Take Your
Time
My Frozen
Lake
Known
As
AMBITION
WILL
TAKE
One
TO
The
OTHER
SIDE
For though
Emotions
Thins
The
Ice
Determination
Seals
Fate.......
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Comments
I think it is always good to have ambition, Greg! And to follow that ambition is what we must strive to do... Otherwise we would just drown in our self pity. You have some good imagery and metaphors in this, my friend. Great work ??x
thank u being me.Β I like this imagery.Β
Hey GREG!!β¦..The Imagery here is quite splendid....even the directions translate into images, like "Walk Slowly".....one intensifies the imagery of creeping along the thin ice.....It's truly compelling stuff my friend!!β¦..ALL STARS!!β¦...Kings To You!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦...T xoΒ : )
Thank u brotherΒ
another fine post, Greg. You are so very talented
Masterful write GregΒ