Poem -

My God ...My God

My God ...My God

Who are you
When the rain falls
when the nights are lonely and cold

who are you

in times of stopping me with a message i dislike...or do not understand in the moment
who are you...when music keeps me strong and 
i can hear my  mother's voice....in me with kind words to my esteem

who are you when i never felt a day without forgetting love or You
a day of sunshine's life ...a night of me with you in thoughts and prayers

divine in time of hope while i am touched with streangth to cope
to believe in you ....in faith and don't have time to hate

who are you

protecting guiding...guarding and forgiving...so many
Who are you
with love of everyone

i have no words to you.... but trust...  for this world seems so lost 
​​​​​​and men  speaks about cost ...no Soul within.... but only Wars ....no peace

who are you...
i asked within my heart
who are You...in need

My God.....My God You Are.....praise be to you my God

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Jai Masters

Impressive piece Lorris; 

so much to interpret and feeling 

angry; is that how you feel? 

It felt like disappointment anger 

disillusioned love you have it all 

in this powerful shall poetry piece 

Enjoyed and shattered by power of 

words....

best wishes Jai:) ?

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Jason Brown

who are you...

The real power of this poem lies in the repetition of that central question...one which must always be asked. Asked and answered...if only by and for ourselves.

Magnificent!!

J ;)

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