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"MY GUITAR" (Eating Me Alive)

"MY GUITAR"  (Eating Me Alive)

A shiver did my spirit seal
A tithing from the soul
A willowy brook that turns lotic
In the name of repentance whole
My guilt, eating me alive...

When I have shown my sour face
And swigged from my horny mug
In a dive-bar torn between races
Am I black or white within this hole I dug
This night my music devours my mistakes...

A liar cannot deliver a song
A burning drake or the night's crow
Make my music a suicidal sorrow
My haunting destroys me before the show
Ever, even, begins....

Torn between bright light overdose
I am half naked upon the stage, half dead
The faces black, the applause morose
The falsehoods white, the truth mulatto
I am a man without a home....

Now I lay me down to sleep
In the rainbow name of repentance whole
But I cannot sleep for I cannot dream
Or my guilt will steal my guitar's sentence
And continue to eat me alive
Yes,
I am a man, without a home...

Tony Taylor
* from a dream

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Wayne Stubbs

???? love this Tony!! My kinda subject! Pinned for its excellence! ??? ā˜®&? brother! ?

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Tony Taylor

Thanx WAYNE!!.....Glad you could relate to the subject matter man.....Always great to hear from you!!....Hope all is well with you and yours!!....Hugs n Smiles!!.......T xo ?āœ“ā¤

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Tony Taylor

Thanx for the stars JG!!.......smiles......T xo ?

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Tony Taylor

Thank youSO MUCH for the PIN GREG!!......stay groovy bro!!......T xo ?āœ“ā¤

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Angel

Really cool writeĀ  angelĀ  enjoyed reading itĀ 

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Simon Bromley

Awesome in its own excellence dear poet brother. Ā 

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