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My Hero

My Hero

The light plays softly on your face
As you breathe in and out
As the rhythms of life go on
I crave a universe with only you
You would be my sun
I would be your moon
Together we make the stars
Lit in ecstasyĀ 
What a fire we would make
I smile to myself
A woman's smile
Full of the little things we treasureĀ 
The way you kissed meĀ 
The first night we were together
The way you hold me while we sleep
The way you look out for me
In so many precious things you do
I am so blessed
So deeply fortunate to have you
You are a noble mythic creature
To me
Far surpassing Hercules or Superman
You are a flesh and blood man
No doubt of that .
Yet the hero in you stands out
Making me Lois Lane, or even Arwen
I can see you on a noble steed
Wearing chain mail like LOTR
I can see you like John the Baptist
OrĀ 
Abe Lincoln
OrĀ 
Even just as you are..
MY hero

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Pratibha Savani

Ooohhh very nice Vanessa. I like this very much. Written so well and like the references to fictional super heroes to describe the man / love. Fabulous x

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Vanessa Reid

well the man was pretty unique and I felt that way after
being with him 20 years.so ... i was lucky.
vanessa

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Being Me

????????Ā  Ā yup!Ā  This is brilliant! It has a massive feel good factor!Ā  This is what love is all about! Wonderful poem, Vannessa. Pinned cos it is soooo good ? x

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Vanessa Reid

Thank you I am glad you enjoyed. that is what this is
all about.. sharing a feeling and someoneĀ 
getting it... love ya
vanessa

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Tony Taylor

This is truly lovely poetry VANESSA!!ā€¦.to have found this in life...is not only a blessing...but a shining example of life's possibilities!!ā€¦...ALL STARS!!ā€¦.well penned dear poet sister!!ā€¦...LOVE & ROCKETS!!ā€¦...T xoĀ  : )

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