Poem -
My Love
I see her swaying
in the wind.Β
I hear her saying
this all should end. Β Β
She weeps quietly
hands on her chest.
She breaths lightly
like she's at rest.
I move towards her,Β
my hand reaching out.Β
Her form is a blur
and I give a quiet shout.Β
She turns and I seeΒ
what has already
come to be.
Slow and steadyΒ
flows the blood.Β
From the heart of my love.Β
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Lily you are truly gifted!
Aww, thank you! It means so much to hear that!Β
xxxLilyΒ
Hey lily a very cool write, Β love the rhyming and the story telling of ghost that once knew love . Cheers keep up the great work, rock
It was actually supposed to be a completely different write but I'm glad how it ended up. Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
xxxLily
BRILLIANT...Β there'sΒ nothingΒ more to say! lol Love, Jack xxx
Aww, thank you Jack!! I happen to love the word brilliant so I'm glad that was the one word you picked to describe it! :)Β
xxxLily
Congrats Lily an awesome won
Congratulations!
gorgeous write congrats x
Congratulations on win . Great write x
Hi Lily Congratulations!
Best wishes DebsΒ
Congrats LILY!!!.....a beautiful write...... and most deserving win my friend!!...... big, huge, HUGZ!!-n-High Fives!!....... smiles.......T xo.Β ?
Hello Lily...
Congratulations on your win!Β
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ