Poem -
My Love
My love intense
Plentiful as flowing waterfalls
Rapidly continuous streams
Beautifully intoxicating shower
Raining forever heart towardly
Rushing continuingly deep cascading
Floods you my love eternal torrents
Heavenly delights seeping ecstacy
Spills with genuine affectionate power
Pictures happiness enlightening tenderness
Ever fresh consistency
Displays my love infinitely
With limitless energy
Graceful shows complete pleasures
Totally captivating splendour
Enriched openness supply
Copiously generous amounts
My dear, my love
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Comments
Gary! This is a beautiful write! Actually, your words remind me of one of my favorite poets; Pablo Neruda. Your write was emotional, formal, earthy, ethereal and full of fiery passion. Loving is a powerful pleasure!
val
Thank You Val,
I can express my feeling better through writing poetry then speaking, words just flows from my mind, sometimes I get mind block and I cannot talk how I feel.
Love is always intense, when not so it of something different to love. Love is always generous, when there is a shortage, it is also something different to love. Love as something without a body is always heavenly, materialism and love never sleep together or they walk the same paths. In short, love is always something big, something eternal and something intangible.
A greeting and congratulations on the poem, is very well constructed and between his verses says more than one truth.
Love when it is always abundant is enriched by more love.