Poem - 21 August 2017, 06:41 The Eclipse Other Light Gary Mclauchlan As the eclipse draws nearer, Time running out, Into the darkness soon Eerie cold air around Something else appears, A different light cometh. Like 2 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 486 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Cold Darkness Light Scary Time Poetry Genre: Drama 2 comments
Lorna21 August 2017, 07:05 Ohhh, this feels like imminent danger is approaching, creeping from the darkness of the eclipse... lorna Reply
Tony Taylor21 August 2017, 08:14 Hey GARY!!....."A different light cometh!!"..... amen to that brother poet!!..... succinctly powerful piece of poetic prose!!.....ALL STARS!!...... well done!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?โโดโณ Reply
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Ohhh, this feels like imminent danger is approaching, creeping from the darkness of the eclipse...
lorna
Hey GARY!!....."A different light cometh!!"..... amen to that brother poet!!..... succinctly powerful piece of poetic prose!!.....ALL STARS!!...... well done!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?โโดโณ