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My Man ...The Tree

My Man ...The Tree

Were I to describing a tree to a blind person it would 
reveal a new vision of you.
From the window of my soul, I now see far more than my eyes
ever truly perceived.
Your roots, burrowed deeply and clinging within the ground,
makes  you unassailable, so  safe and secure,
immobile... yet able to sway when the wind of love tugs at your heart.
The gnarly bark covering the delicate inner fibres , protecting their vulnerability,
speaks of your quiet strength, that so often appears brash, rough and flaky…
yet hides the soul of an angel.
The luxuriant foliage, disguising the bracken interior, merely a cloak for your gentleness.
Glistening sap gathering in sticky globules adorning the trunk, so reminiscent  
of  the life blood coursing through your veins,
that I know you would be willing to shed, without hesitation ,
for the ones you love.
A man with many facets, like a tree provides wood for warmth,
your all embracing arms draw me into the incandescent glow of your love.
Your constancy providing a shelter against all weathers,
as solid as a woodland log cabin .
Knowing also, that amidst  all the strength, when autumn comes and you shed your leaves.
your defences are willingly  down and you are forever in my charge.
 

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Jason Brown

Knowing also, that amidst  all the strength, when autumn comes and you shed your leaves.
your defences are willingly  down and you are forever in my charge.

You build up such a fully drawn picture of solid dependability; just to be demolished by the wry reversal in those last few lines. Just how "willingly" your man/the tree drops his defences in Autumn is debatable...but it's patently obvious that you rather enjoy the fact!!

A carefully constructed piece; which will have its female readers smiling knowingly...and its male readers wondering what their partners are planning for the not so distant future!!

J ;)

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lodigiana

Hahaha!! Drat!... no woman can ever have any secrets from you Jason!!!! ( please don't give them away though ,otherwise we are powerless ) a lesson maybe for ladies to ensure they  always chose  Deciduous as opposed to Evergreens !!!
Thank you for your comments and making me smile :) xxx
Lodigiana

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Lorna

Hahahahaha

no woman can ever have any secrets from you Jason!!!! 

yes Lodigiana he reads me like a book, and he doesn't fall for and subtle attempt of female manipulation at all....I really have my work cut out hahahahaha....
your poem is fantastic, I really enjoyed it
Love Lorna xxx 

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lodigiana

Darn these astute creatures who refuses to be drawn in by the sirens singing!!! hahaha! So pleased you enjoyed it- knowing that always makes me happy! xxx
Lodigiana

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Lorna

I'm in tears with laughter here...xxx

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StevieC

hi Lodigiana- I have never really thought of myself as a tree trunk but there you go!!! Great write  and nicely put together ! 
xxx

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