Poem -

My mind

My mind is a place of sorrow, it looks like a mess
I really don't think you want to look inside of my head
There's a war between the demons and angels
But the evil seems to be winning for a while now
I'm starting to feel on my own now
I want you to leave me alone
but comfort me now
Negativity flows through my positivity, making it deliberately hard for me
to love. 

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Ella

amazing poem!!

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al Bikaadi

Reminds me how I was feeling just before I wrote Aftershock. 

It's a love-hate affair with the Gyre.

Smooth writeup and welcome

 

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Tony Taylor

Interesting...... and compelling because you seem to recognize your own collision course!!....... well delivered poetic prose!!......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo 🐧✴❤
Ps. WELCOME to COSMO!!

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