my misteke“s i made

suddenly everything is clearĀ
of where i went wrong
i tried to be a different man
trying to fit in where i didn“t belong,
i hung around with those crazy peopleĀ
who i thought where my friends
they brought me down in every wayĀ
and into darkness i did descend,
it took so long for me to realize
that i was the better man
i will try to get my life straight
i can do this i know i can,
with a little bit of hopeĀ
and a little bit of luckĀ
iĀ“ll get myself out of Ā this placeĀ
where for year“s i was stuck,
but to win the trust of my familyĀ
this will be the hardest thingĀ
so much heart ache i did couseĀ
so much pain i did bring,
but all i can do is try
i“ll show them how i have changed
iĀ“ll show them the boy i used to beĀ
but maybe for them all this will be strange ,
to forgive someone for what they have doneĀ
sometimes realy isenĀ“t funĀ
but you are my fameilyĀ
and i am your falling son ,
so if one chance is all i haveĀ
then this chance i will takeĀ
i love you mom and dadĀ
and promise this mistake i will never again make .
writen
by
Ā paul o carroll
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Paul, you nearly made me cry then and the ending made me well up!!! Ā Your writing Paul (forgiving a few spelling mistakes lol!!) is getting better and better. Ā This was such a touching piece with such a wonderful sentiment. Ā I could feel your heart in this one and it truly moved me!! Ā A huge vote from me; nomed and a firm favourite!!!! :)
o my rachel thanks so much , and you would be wight sometimes my spelling is bad i try to get better but sometimes it is hard , i left school at 13 years old to help  mother ,  thank god i can read and write a bit  thanks again rachel for your comment and i will to get my spelling“s better xxxxxx
Speechless!!!!!!!! :)
wow thanks rosa Ā for that lovely comment ,
lovely name rosa
Oh Paulā¦I could so relate to the deep and truly heart aching write! This poem is an open wound of remorse. Ā This write is one of determination to move forward, past the pain. Ā This write if one of honor. Ā ThisĀ write is a dedication and a promise to loving parents. Ā This write is wonderful!
valĀ
wow thanks val Ā that was so nice of you xxx all the best and keep writing xx
lovely write x
thanks susan xx