my misteke´s i made

suddenly everything is clear
of where i went wrong
i tried to be a different man
trying to fit in where i didn´t belong,
i hung around with those crazy people
who i thought where my friends
they brought me down in every way
and into darkness i did descend,
it took so long for me to realize
that i was the better man
i will try to get my life straight
i can do this i know i can,
with a little bit of hope
and a little bit of luck
i´ll get myself out of this place
where for year´s i was stuck,
but to win the trust of my family
this will be the hardest thing
so much heart ache i did couse
so much pain i did bring,
but all i can do is try
i´ll show them how i have changed
i´ll show them the boy i used to be
but maybe for them all this will be strange ,
to forgive someone for what they have done
sometimes realy isen´t fun
but you are my fameily
and i am your falling son ,
so if one chance is all i have
then this chance i will take
i love you mom and dad
and promise this mistake i will never again make .
writen
by
paul o carroll
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Paul, you nearly made me cry then and the ending made me well up!!! Your writing Paul (forgiving a few spelling mistakes lol!!) is getting better and better. This was such a touching piece with such a wonderful sentiment. I could feel your heart in this one and it truly moved me!! A huge vote from me; nomed and a firm favourite!!!! :)
o my rachel thanks so much , and you would be wight sometimes my spelling is bad i try to get better but sometimes it is hard , i left school at 13 years old to help mother , thank god i can read and write a bit thanks again rachel for your comment and i will to get my spelling´s better xxxxxx
Speechless!!!!!!!! :)
wow thanks rosa for that lovely comment ,
lovely name rosa
Oh Paul…I could so relate to the deep and truly heart aching write! This poem is an open wound of remorse. This write is one of determination to move forward, past the pain. This write if one of honor. This write is a dedication and a promise to loving parents. This write is wonderful!
val
wow thanks val that was so nice of you xxx all the best and keep writing xx
lovely write x
thanks susan xx