Poem -

My place called home

author
sophiex-d

My place called home is not warm and inviting
my place called home is cold and frightening

my place called home is not where I relax
my place called home is where I'm tortured at
I am not there by choice I cannot leave
I'm stuck here all day

only my thoughts and me

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Total votes: 2
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Home Prisoner Sad
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
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BLOSSOM

So sad and very disturbing to think that anyone would feel like that in their own home.  The structure was good and the repetition used in each line gave it intensity of feeling for me sophie.  Nicely written.  A vote from me:)

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BLOSSOM's pictureBLOSSOM8011 years ago

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