Poem -

by, by my pretty lady

did you ever care at all -

tell me why did you stay-

did you feel sorry for me -

do you think that´s the only way-

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all you had to do was just speek 

and maby we could talk this through 

but instead  you insult me . 

tell me what are you trying to do 

#

so lets be  honest here

 and put what we have to rest 

you have your little thing on the side 

i bet you dident think i would have guest

#

so it´s by ,by  my pretty lady -

i guess this is the end 

go and find someone else 

to drive around the bend 

writen 

by 

paul o carroll 

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Valerie Beasley...

Paul I really like the "resignation" you imbued in this write!   It may not have been an easy "goodbye" however it was one that was deliberate and delivered with finality!  Great write!

val

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BLOSSOM

Nice write Paul, good flow to your poetry:)

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