My room = My mind
They say the way you keep your room reflects your mind
and I think they're right.
My room is messy
but not in the way that I know where everything's at
in the way that I never invite anyone over
because I don't want them to see the mess
in the way that I've hidden things like my feelings so well
that I can't even find them
in the way that the photos on the wall are ruined with age
some so distorted I can't even tell what they were, like my memories
in the way that I wish the bitter cold would go away
but like depression, it never does
in the way that everything is everywhere and nothing is where it's supposed to be
like my knowledge during exams
in the way that i wish I could get out but I know I can't
not until it's clean
not until it's fixed
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Wonderful symbolism! thank you for sharing, your messy room helps us all see within! Welcome! looking forward to more of your writes!..............Jim
Wow REIGH!!.....this is the second excellent debut' piece I've read today......I like the VERY well executed poetic prose you've crafted here......the use of metaphor in representing the mind.....the carefully penned phrasing and beautifully delivered imagery that was born from it!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!....well done dear poet sister......and.....WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
"in the way that i`ve hidden things
like my feelings so well
that i can`t find them"....Beautifully well done .....all smiles welcome
Wonderful comparison! Welcome to Cosmo! <3
Thank you!
Quite a good write on one's mind set. Like it.
Good write 😊
Bravo
A really decent write Reigh x
I love it. The symbolism is fantastic.
Keep writing. This is really good
wonderful poem
Lovely thoughtful write... Great job. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.