Poem -
My School
English, Maths and science too
you can learn all this at Primary
School the teachers there are
nothing but the best they can
teach you stuff that the others forget.
I've been going there since the
age of three I know more then my mam could ever teach me.
Reading and writing is a good
place to start when learning to
spell your name with a helping
start Primary School is the place
to be when learning to count 1,2,3
Written by 6 years old (c) copy right protection this was wrote by my eldest son
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My cute little bundle age 6 was asked to write a poem about his school and this is what he came up with he's so clever
I am so proud to announce to everyone on Cosmofunnel that is reading my poems but mostly to those that are and have read this one in particular that my lovely soon to be 7 years old came home today and told me that it is being put up on his school page WELL DONE
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Such a proud mammy
you should be very happy, this is terrific, lots of personality....cheers, poet and 'mom' of poet
Hey Christopher
Thanks for your kind words my little champ is much better then I was at poetry at his age
We loving writing poems songs and stories
He's even wrote lyrics for a song he's trying to write you'll find them on my website the link is attached to my profile
Kind regards Jennie
Thanks again
Aww brilliant, tell your son he got five stars from me
future poet in the making
Lorna
x
Aw wow thanks Lorna he's go to be so happy to hear he's getting more votes then me he keeps pestering me to check the school page for his poem but I don't think his head teacher will get it on til Monday if she s putting it up thanks for your kind words x
Well done Little man, you make us both proud you've written a poem and read it out loud. Marks out of 10 only come now and then, words you've written for all to view a lesson to learn by a selected few. Keep up the spelling there's no telling how far it will go and the rhyming you'll show. Very well said the poem I read now that I read it, its time for bed!
A poem for a poem this is the response my son's poem got from his grandad xx
though taking his name out and changed it to little man for personal reasons x
Hello Jayjay Jennie C...
I have read this over and over and over again...
Every time I try to leave a comment my thoughts go back to when my Daughter was just a little older and her music class was putting on a special show for family and friends...
The song that always stands out to me they performed was Wind Beneath My Wings and the children singing and doing the motions it was so beautiful and she never to took her eyes off of me and she saw the tears in my eyes and I didn't think she noticed and she smiled her beautiful smile and when it was all over she ran up to me and have me the biggest hug and kiss...
I love you bigger than the world Mommy...
The other parents and her music teacher just stood there...
I love you too I said...
I understand the not in your heart and the treasure and memories that will last your whole life through...
Awesome poem from your little man...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
sparrowsong that is a nice story
The love in your heart...
Not not...
I don't even know how that got there...
Thanks again for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Sparrowsong
we both really appreciate your kind words my son is over the moon with all the attention his poem is receiving thank you for shrinv your memories of your daughters school music play
thanks again xxxx
JAYJAY what a great poem I love it
Thank you much appreciated