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My sentimental love song đź’”

My sentimental love song đź’”

Shall I sing for you a sentimental love song?

This has some emotional turmoil in it, so smiling when singing it would be kinda wrong

And its lyrics are solemnly sad, so I suppose I gotta stay strong

Mind you it would mean a lot to me, if when we get to the catchy chorus, could everyone sing along?

Okay are you all ready? Then here we will jolly well go, I will have to take my time with the tempo, coz this song is slow
                        
                          ~
..She loved her lover like no other, but alas he wasn’t good..

..So that dreadful day he stood her up when she was waiting at the alter, this she never, ever understood..
                         ~

Chorus *

“Oh my beautiful, bonny lass, won’t you marry me? 
I will buy a little quaint cottage in the splendour of the countryside and we will both be free”
                           ~

And so she ended up a spinster, where she owned a townhouse in the city

Yet the folks from her bygone days couldn’t quite fathom this out, coz this lovely lass was so pretty

Chorus*
                          ~

Well I hope you all enjoyed my little tune, I made it up especially for you

I can only pray that those lyrics which I conjured up from thin air, didn’t make you too blue…

      

 

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Greg Etsell

awsome song Jill 
all 3 are awsome 
you are a awsome writer 
i cant keep up with you in 
writing but love how 
and what you write 
every day i am 
way behind in my 
writing this mouth
but have been doing lots
of yard work i am almost
caught up 

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Jill Tait

Awww Good Morning & Thank you so much as always my awesome friend ❤️🧡💛💜💙❤️

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Greg Etsell

One question do you write all day and then put them up the next day 

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Jill Tait

No a poem only takes me mins so i hardly write thru day, but usually do 3 in a row for next morning ❤️💕❤️

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Greg Etsell

You are just awesome you must lay awake all night thinking of these poems

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Jill Tait

Haha some nights I do 🤣❤️💕❤️

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Greg Etsell

Poem  contest 
by Annette
call bird
What do you write their
I was waiting for others to write
to see what it was about what day would write
So I could write but I have no idea what to write And I don’t want to be the first person to write

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Jill Tait

It isTims comp I dont know ❤️

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Greg Etsell

All right i’ll just have to wait
and see who writes what 
First

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Greg Etsell

i am over the limit 
i do likte the band
you told me about
 

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Jill Tait

Awww grand ❤️❤️❤️

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Terry Reeves

Hi Jill,
Nice one.
Glad you're around -
we missed your writing!
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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Jill Tait

Awwww I devote my time to Passion of poetry, I am an admin in it my lovely ❤️❤️❤️

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