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My shooting star ⭐️

My shooting star ⭐️

I search for you betwixt yon bedazzled, blinking blanket of starry shimmering lights

Up amidst the highest heavens within the clearest of magical, mid winter nights

And though I cannot sense your presence in amongst those celestial sights

Something solaced my spiritual soul from a sudden shooting stars flight..

Mother, Father was that fantastic falling meteor you?

Did you just zoom across that midnight sky from out of the blue?

Well I made a wish as it took me by surprise, it seemed the right thing to do

Yet I dare not tell you what I wished for unless my prayer will not come true..

Tonight I shall sit outside staring at the skies

And who knows I might espy another shooting star as it captivate my eyes

As I sing to both of you my sweetest of lullabies

From those memories of my childhood when we used to harmonise…

 

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Gwendoline

Beautiful reflection of those we love and have lost. That secret wish cushioned in your words, hinting at your desire for your past to be in your present. Such a sweet and majestic write ❤️🌹 

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Jill Tait

Awww you got it in one my
lovely lass Thanking you so kindly 🌹💕🌹

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Tony Taylor

JILL ~  your mastery over the rhythmical phrasing of the poetic....truly shines here......an amazing of capturing "Lightning in a bottle!".......ALL STARS & PINNED.......fantastic imagery my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

Thanking you kind SirTony 💕❤️🌹

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Pratibha Savani

Aaahhh Jill. Beautiful narrative piece.....I love the way you make it sound like your talking to us...or in this case to your parents....magical as the stars in the night. Pinned! Pxxx

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanking you loads to the moon & back my lovely poetic penfriend 💕⭐️🌹❤️

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