Poem -
My Sometimes
My thoughts sometimes take me to a place
Where you becomes my black rose of infinity
Where your smile is prettier than petals
A place where happiness is all I see in you
My thoughts take meΒ
Where your touching is always more than what I feel
Where your eyes have a smile of your Soul
A place where you make me understand my thinking
Where your reality are my dreams and wishes
Where your heart is honest and kind
A place where promises are never broken
My thinking becomes your trust
Where your spirit lives so vibrantly
Where my life becomes your Soul
A place where there is nothing left butΒ
Peace and your Love
My thoughts sometimes take me to......
Heaven with You.
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Comments
brilliant piece Lorris.
Thank You Lisa....always
Hey SIR LORRIS!!....first of all, I have to say....... the pictures you've been choosing for your poems lately are spectacularly cool!!.....I was just talking to Cherie about that last night....... secondly, I think this is the best write you've delivered (that I've read) so far....... great craftsmanship in every way...... from word choices for your phrasing...... to the formatting......I had to "PIN" this..... Loved the otherworldly ambiance created here....... great write ~High fives brother poet!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?
Thank you Tony......thank you Lisa.....appreciated.... Smiles to you all
Thank you Cherie..... For all your reviews...and remarks, what interest you always put in your words......thanks with smiles.
Thank you all
Thank you..Flower Girl.....appreciated