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My Will

Simplicity

My Will

My Will 

Will the sun shine my soul 
Will the heat burn my demons
Will the rain give me feeling
Will music hold my dreams in 
Will technology take my freedom 
Will freedom bring me choices 
Will the wind dry my tears 
Will media create my fears 
Will news bring me misery 
Will today learn from history 
Will the future learn from today 
Will my smile help me laugh
Will the dark carve a path 
Will the light ignite my heart 
Will my heart hold it's rhythm 
Will my limits reach a lesson
Will my ears help me feel
Will my sight help me listen 
Will my touch hold me 
Will my mind help me see
Will my eyes help me dream  
Will my dreams share my path 
Will my path make a map 
Will my map make a mark 
Will my mind control my time 
Will my time feel patient
Will my patients remember me 
Will my memories be remembered 
Will my money understand value's that don't cost others 
Will my values make a difference
Will these words give me reason 
Will my reasoning be realised 
Does silence have a sound? 

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

all interesting questions. what it brings to mind for me is " be in the world' but not of the world" good write!....................................Jim

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Gwendoline

Very clever Dan, as I read this it chanted like a mantra and that last line 

Does silence have a sound

It’s almost like a meditation this. A wonderful piece 

Gwen :) 

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Tony Taylor

It's like some kind of secret Mantra!!.....It reads with quietly pensive fluidity......ALL STARS!!....well done Dr. BRAIN!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo  : )

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Being Me

Wow!  Such a lot of questions!  I have found that silence is heavy more than noisy and it cuts like the sharpest knife through butter.  Great write ⚘x

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Dan Brain

My thanks for your minds time and welcome words. So very true.., silence can be uncomfortably noisy for me.
Thankfully this has meant admiring your work too. 

It’s quite something to feel and recognise relative unique minds. Thank you x  

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The fish of the sea

Wow, what a write, "Does silence have a sound" I love the contrasting phrases, it brings a sense of questioning oneself and our authority, by asking rhetorical questions, makes for very impactful poetry! Enjoyed Dan!

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