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Mystical Milk Bowl

Mystical Milk Bowl

Iridescent glow,Β Β 

amidst a solid black canvas.

A flashlight,

guiding mislead souls to purity.

A full bowl of milk,

mysticallity in the making.

Strange wind blows,

the monsoon of new season arrives.

Rainfall blurs the eye of the beholder,

for it is a new day.

A full bowl of milk at midnight, you see,

transitioning over the course of time.

A glass of orange juice today,

for the faces are gone, as is,

the man on the moon.

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Jason Brown

Intriguing! Elusive and ephemeral. Lovely.
Well done.

J.

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Tony Taylor

Hey TAYLOR12!!.......some strong phrasing here..... and the varying perspectives on the lunar imagery was VERY poetic!!.......ALL STARS!!...... well done...... and .....WELCOME to COSMO!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?

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taylor12

Thank you SO much. Your feedback made my day.

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Catalina Chavez

amazing first piece. I hope to read more like this. -cat xoxo

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taylor12

Thank you so much!! Glad you enjoyed it.

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Christopher Correia

taylor12, an excellent poem on the moon.....'A full bowl of milk at midnight' how cool is that? Β  your imagery is magical, and I enjoyed reading this, tribute

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