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MYTHOLOGY OF LIFE AND THE BIBLE GOD (AND HIS POEMS)

MYTHOLOGY OF LIFE AND THE BIBLE GOD (AND HIS POEMS)

I stand hear on the mountain
watching the sunrise holding 
my bible in my arms like a baby
I reach out to GOD with my hand
and said can i walk and talk with you
And then GOD whispered in 
my ear like the wind and said 
read his poems and you will
Get the meaning of the 
mythology of life and the
universe and SUDDENLY!!!!
a black hole opened up 
and I was sucked in to the 
ABYSS of this poets life 
and mind and I stand at his door 
and hear music andSUDDENLY!!
the door opens and I am sucked 
in to the ABYSS of his mind 
I hear music I hear laughter 
some one crying I feel frustration
anger I find in my journey in his 
mind I find the mythology of 
life and the universe in his mind
and come to a understanding
of it and the feeling of it and then
SUDDENLY!!!! A black hole opens
up and sucks me in the abyss of
life and then I stand on the mountain
top watching the sunset and the tears
in my eyes and now know the mythology
of life and the answer to life I thank this 
poet for showing me the way 

 

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Tony Taylor

Friggin' Brilliant brother!!..... and the honest truth is..... not many people/writers will ever know.... just.... how brilliant.... this truly is.... because you have chosen the most noble of paths....THAT of the true believer...... and truly honest man!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....I believe you are on a path that can ONLY lead to the MOST righteous of paths GREG!!........BEAUTIFULLY INSIGHTUL brother!!........ and revealing to those truly in need!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo.  : )

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tony it took me weeks to write this poem I didn’t want to write at first but it kept coming to me and coming to me I am nagging at me so today I had to write it And it tired me out so much Thank you for reading and pinning this poem It means a lot to me and it brings tears to my eyes thank you

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Tony Taylor

No worries brother..... It is WELL deserved!!...... your cyber-friend and admirer.......tony. xo.  : )

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Cherie Leigh

HI Greg....I can tell you spent a lot of time on this poem!  I think it is awesome when we can learn from someone else sharing their beliefs and insights about the world and God....and to make us think. That is such a great gift to receive.  We can also learn so much from nature and the feelings we get amidst it that point to a Creator who loves us....I really like the theme and ideology you share about learning about God and the mythology of life from Tony's poetry...I think his poems about spirituality are his best.  You really put a lot of thought into this!  Great work!  ;) xo Love n Hugs

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Greg Etsell

Cherie thank you for reading this poem this poem had 
been on my mind for weeks I didn't want to write it 
at frist but it kept coming to me and yesterday 
all of this poem came to me so I had write it
and it came out the way I wanted and after
was done writing it I was so tired after I went 
to bed not to long after thank you agin for 
reading 

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Marion Price

What a fabulous write Greg, love it ...pinned đź’•

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Marion this was not a hard write I just took a long time to come to me and after I wrote it it tired me out I didn’t want to write it at first But it just kept coming to me and head to Write it thanks for pinning This means a lot to me

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