Poem -
Needing You
Its rumbling outside
Not a soul in sight
The rain is dancing in puddles
As the night light flickers with a crackling sound
The wind is delivering a message
I can sense the energy of the air
It has uplifted me
My feet bare, buried in the ground
I can feel the pulse of the earth
My breathing is shallow
My heartbeat is weak
My strength is gone
Im alone with the universe
I need you here with me
To witness my preserverance
To understand my conscienceness of love
I need you to complete my being
And together become one
I need u to need me
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Comments
Hi Jaleesa. I like the way you pieced this together, from the rain dancing in puddles to the pulse of the esrth. Kool lines and well done.
Cheers Byd0nz
I enjoy both of your poems.. Sorry I was not able to leave a comment on the other one. I can feel those lines deep within.. Gifted! That's what you are.. Thanks Jaleesa.. My eyes are on your page.. A handful of stars my friend.
another wonderful write.