Poem -
Never Know....Never Show
Never live………..never die.
Never smile......never cry.
Never wake......never sleep.
Never take.......never keep.
Never good……… never bad.
Never happy......never sad.
Never win………… never lose.
Never say………….never chose.
Never know ……..never see.
Never really ………ever me.....
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Comments
cool write linda
Thank you so much Linda for your kind comments- Much appreciated xx
Lodigiana
i like the flow of ths poem and the constant repetition of the word never.
Thanks so much Krystyn for your kind comments which I really appreciate! xxx
Lodigiana
Hello Lodigiana...
Very interesting write my friend!
A definite Read over and over...
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Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Lodigiana, this is a bit of a departure from your usual style but one that I like very much! The timbre of it makes me keep wanting to re read it- well balanced and concise. Nice one!!
Hi Lodigiana, thrying to balance everything in our lives is difficult. Never say...never choose, those struck a chord....I often do anything to keep stability I'm never able to choose and if I go along with someone else's decision that was wrong, (even down to restaurant choice haha) still I'd never say..haha...so indecisive
great poem..made me think
Lorna
XXX
Trying****
This made me laugh Lorna!! we all do a bit of that dont we?' indian or chinese tonight? ...' 'you chose'.. 'Dont mind'.. 'Whatever'..In most things I am definitely undecided!! Thanks so much for reading glad you liked it xx
Lodigiana
It is with each choice; some subtle, some less so: that we slowly and irrevocably define ourselves and the world around us. To not make a choice is to make a choice...the choice of not choosing. But where's the fun in that?!
In the simplicity of this short poem, you've touched on quite a bit of profundity.
Ain't that always the case?!
Tightly written...
J ;)
As always you are 'bang on' my friend!!,,the choice of not choosing is a choice..albeit a powerless one ...which I guess in itself, still does in a way define us.!!! Thanks so much Jason for reading and commenting.xx
Lodigiana
A simple thank you and Merry Christmas Lodigiana.
You are not forgotten. x