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Night Realms...............................................................dedicated to Hope

Night Realms...............................................................dedicated to Hope

In the loop of my frozen diamond view,
   Crimson, gold, or translucent blue.
Facets of color shimmer and dance,
Where do I look; slow down or advance?

I fly to destinations of peril,
   Or circle around an empty barrel.
Cruise under an oceans nighttime realm,
Viewing flint figures from the night ships helm.

One dream; personal future in visions,
   Alters my course with flowing decisions.
Flickers of thought augment the picture,
Still squinting eyelids make out the feature.

Split reality from nightmarish dreams,
   Flee from darkness! or embrace the scenes?
Spreading your arms while trying to fly,
Or cover your face and try not to die!

I've lived a lifetime in my sleeping nights,
   Cast into prison, then understood my rights!
Pondered this learning of my tomorrow,
It lifts my spirit from depths of sorrow!

I'll always seek messages from the mountain,
   Flowing revelation; gift of the fountain.
It rescues my spirit; and grants me peace,
Renewing my contract; eternal lend lease.

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Yiyan Han

Excellent piece of spiritual insight: oh yes during Christmas every one would seek to lift their "spirit from depths of sorrow" including me.

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! This is packed with a stunning array of crystal clear images...that flash through the minds eye like food for thought and delicious to digest!!.....ALL STARS!!....marvelous writing my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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The fish of the sea

Calming and fantastical! Love it, Jim! Your phrasing and structure brought me on a journey. Especially love your photo too! Greatly accompanies your work. Kudos my friend, Max

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Being Me

What a beautiful poem, Jim! The first two lines pulled me right in and stopped my scrolling finger lol.  Brilliant poem 👏👏👏 x

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Being Me

Oh Jim, that should be the goal of us all! To stop each other's scrolling fingers 🤣🤣🤣 

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Magic Bellmore

Wow, brilliant write Jim! I couldn't stop going over it again and again, I love your rhyming scheme with it too! I usually don't do rhymes because they seem cheesy but yours is just amazing, great job.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I love to rhyme Magic! It is what motivates me to write, that challenge alone! I think it can be cheesy, and that is the challenge! thank you for the compliment! means a lot coming from you!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Jim

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Neville

What can I say, there aint nothing about this whole page that aint splendid .. Neville 

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