Night Realms...............................................................dedicated to Hope

In the loop of my frozen diamond view,
Ā Ā Crimson, gold, or translucent blue.
Facets of color shimmer and dance,
Where do I look; slow down or advance?
I fly to destinations of peril,
Ā Ā Or circle around an empty barrel.
Cruise under an oceans nighttime realm,
Viewing flint figures from the night ships helm.
One dream; personal future in visions,
Ā Ā Alters my course with flowing decisions.
Flickers of thought augment the picture,
Still squinting eyelids make out the feature.
Split reality from nightmarish dreams,
Ā Ā Flee from darkness! or embrace the scenes?
Spreading your arms while trying to fly,
Or cover your face and try not to die!
I've lived a lifetime in my sleeping nights,
Ā Ā Cast into prison, then understood my rights!
Pondered this learning of my tomorrow,
It lifts my spirit from depths of sorrow!
I'll always seek messages from the mountain,
Ā Ā Flowing revelation; gift of the fountain.
It rescues my spirit; and grants me peace,
Renewing my contract; eternal lend lease.

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Excellent piece of spiritual insight: oh yes during Christmas every one would seek to lift their "spirit from depths of sorrow" including me.
You honor me with your words Yiyan!
An honor sparrowsong!
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An honor Hannah!
Wow!! This is packed with a stunning array of crystal clear images...that flash through the minds eye like food for thought and delicious to digest!!.....ALL STARS!!....marvelous writing my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ : )
Thank You Tony! Honored dear sir!
Calming and fantastical! Love it, Jim! Your phrasing and structure brought me on a journey. Especially love your photo too! Greatly accompanies your work. Kudos my friend, Max
Thank You Max!
What a beautiful poem, Jim! The first two lines pulled me right in and stopped my scrolling finger lol.Ā Brilliant poem ššš x
My goal! stop your scrolling finger! Thank You!
Oh Jim, that should be the goal of us all! To stop each other's scrolling fingers š¤£š¤£š¤£Ā
Wow, brilliant write Jim! I couldn't stop going over it again and again, I love your rhyming scheme with it too! I usually don't do rhymes because they seem cheesy but yours is just amazing, great job.
I love to rhyme Magic! It is what motivates me to write, that challenge alone! I think it can be cheesy, and that is the challenge! thank you for the compliment! means a lot coming from you!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Thank you Traurean! for the support!
Thank You Peter!
What can I say, there aint nothing about this whole page that aint splendid .. NevilleĀ