Poem -
NIGHTSHIFT
Quiet reflection on long drive home
Anticipation of sleep till noon
Waggy tails as door unlocks
My sanctuary
My golden plot...
Through the gate where ponies wait
Crisp early morning air elates
Carrots all round
Balls are thrown
So in love
With home...
With home...
Gaze around at greenest hills
At dawning sky a heartbeat thrills
Feel a breeze upon warm skin
As gentle daffodils all grin...
And primrose raise
Their sleepy heads
And i
Renewed...
And i
To bed...
I'm home
I'm home
Im home
My soul is home....
Marion Price(2020)
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Totally love thisun tis so calming and beautiful pinned my friend XXX❤️?❤️
Thankyou my friend...this is truly how I feel Jill, I'm so lucky and ever thankful for my tiny piece of paradise...off to ...yes...Nightshift now lol...but hope to sneak on later and catch up with yours ???
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???? oh, an excellent poem, Marion. And ponies! You have ponies? And dogs? All at home? Heaven!! x
Dogs yes and cats...ponies do not belong to me but are my friends and visit a couple of times a day for hugs...and always in the early morning when I get home. They roam the field adjacent to my garden so they are my very dear friends. Yes, a tiny tiny piece of heaven...I am truly blessed at this stage in my life BM...thankyou...stay safe ?
Dear MARION!!
You have truly painted a little piece of paradise quite vividly here..... allowing the minds-eye of the reader to fill in the imagery that you so beautifully suggest with such lovely phrasing as ~
~ "Through the gate where ponies wait
Crisp early morning air elates
Carrots all round
Balls are thrown
So in love
With home...
With home....
You truly have a gift for wielding words my friend!!.......A Pleasure to bask in your imagery for a while!!....... Thank you dear poet sister!!........ALL STARS!!..........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo. : )
Thanks Tony...you are very kind. Hope this finds you in very good health my friend...stay safe..hugs ?