Poem -
Nitty Gritty
~~Nitty Gritty
Finding faults by thou,
Recalling on times that was never,
Comparing thee to thy mystical,
Using thou weakness to shield thy self,
Open thou eyes or feel the feel,
Of another in thou circle of “so”
Called comfort, laughter, love and care
Is the principle to life,
Choosing thou foot path, to bethink the foot prints
Thou had left behind is followed by thou mind,
Heart, and protected by thou keeper.
Pick thou pick betwixt heart or mind, and live
Thou choice for thy rest of thou life.
"slave for love...betwixt the mind or heart"
published: 05/17/2015
Junaid Boughan
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Hey Junaid Boughan!!.........I Love classical English poetry..........the problem is it's so dam difficult to master.........with no friends or acquaintances who actually speak that way...........that said.........I think what you've created here is a VERY noble attempt at conveying the truest of beauty in language.........."Comparing thee to thy mystical" is fantastic phrasing my friend..........well done.... 5*s .............love and rockets!!.............T xo
thank you Tony!