Poem -
No piCturEs oNly a taLe...
I'm in the black and purple room and I'm about to pull the rabbit out of the hat. However, things have gotten real and she's about to look at me with the bedroom eyes again. Oh my God I cannot go another round with her love. She has got me up against the ropes and I dread the excitement. I should get a Scholarship for the education I have been getting, but I know it's invalid just like my life one day. It's the way she throws me down all around, that I cannot let up or else there's another hell to pay in a heaven I know all too well. I dug deep down and projected myself and gave my earthly gift up to her and it's beaten her back for another day...
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Ah the unholy torture of it!! (smiles)..........this is REALLY good writing Richard..........I think it would be even more powerful if you decided to break your lines in a poetic fashion........but hey!.......I'm just a guy ~ and regardless this was a LOT of fun to read........definitely has me smiling still!!........well done my friend!........ALL STARS!!..........T xo
Thank you very much Tony. It's always nice when people say wonderful things about the writings, but what is even better is constructive criticism to help others to grow. I often wonder how to get better and I have tried the poetic fashion, but I always end up writing words that one may guess, instead of a surprise. I think I may attempt a poetic fashion at this and place a #2 after... Thanks again sir!
Hello Richard, im digging this write man. Brings back so many memories of when me and my wife first met and we put on a clinic, man I never thought id say no, and you can be in pain from too much of it lol. Ill tell you true I miss the shit out of them days cause now its few and far between. Regardless of how you put your writes together you have a way with your words that string the reader along with the honesty of your situation. Well done.
Devon thank you for the kind words... I know it's so neat to be brought back to a time and remember the bitter sweet, whether it's through a song, story or poem. You hit it on the head as the days are far and few. Thank you sir! Rich