No reason to lie
I felt the reason to tell no lie,
I don't know when I'm gonna die, so to hell sitting here wandering why, when the answers only come with time, and there no one's but mine to define.
So I'm spending mine gratified.
I got my reason to tell no lie,
I just want to live an honest life.
All is what is meant to be because your actions have an impact on your reality, forever wanting time to be free, sacrificing happiness for company, and working too hard for the money, I'd rather the money work hard for me.
I got my reason to tell no lie, I just want to live an honest life.
I force no friend I fear no foe, by the time I come it's time to go.
Without warning it all breaks down to show, that it's easy to forget what is learnt to know.
So I've got to let go of the debts I tow, from the centre I entered to the so below.
I got my reason to tell no lie, I just want to live an honest life.
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I like the rhyme scheme you used. It's very musical/lyrical. Is this a song also. I think all you would need to make it a song, is the backround, (repeating lines), like you did in your previous poem.
Favorite part
This sentence is powerful due to the alliteration and rhyme. This could become a repeating line throughout the poem, if you ever thought about making this one longer. Just one idea.
Thank you the reapeated lines are a great idea, I'm forever in debt to your priceless advice.
I've always wanted to learn how to write a song. I wrote only one when I was young. I'm not a natural rhymer, I need to go and get some children nursery rhyme books, to boost my rhyming ability. I am so impressed with your creative writing and the song lyrics I've read by you.
I posted some of the song
the parts I can remember.
Every Lasting Love
By, Katina W. Borgersen :)
I've thought about tomorrow
I've thought about today.
I've thought about being closer,
closer everyday.
It's Every Lasting Love
Oh, Oh, Everlasting love.
Oh oh, ever lasting la, a ove.
It's ever lasting love.
Hand and Hand together.
Side by Side each day.
We thought about how our love
could ever change.
It's Every Lasting Love
Oh, Oh, Everlasting love.
Oh oh, everlasting la, a ove.
We've lived our lives together.
With happiness and Love.
The love that makes our life
together.
Special and above.
It's Everlasting Love
Oh, oh, everlasting... love
It's every lasting... love.
Oh, oh, oh.
I've thought about how our love
could ever change.
Oh, how could I be so foolish
to even think such thoughts as
this.
Our love will last forever
with everlasting thoughts.
It's Everlasting Love
Oh, oh, everlasting... love
It's every lasting... love.
Oh, oh, oh.
It's everlasting... love...
I came back to edit my song again.
This is most of the song.
Have a wonderful day -- keep inspiring us with
your beautiful poetry and song lyrics.
Favourite lines especially the first one because it's so unclearly true that we all think about how love could change.
As I walked around the back yard, I began hearing the music in my mind. I may have the wording a little off here. Some people are natural song writers. I do better with historical fiction and nonfiction. Song lyrics are challenging. Some music that I listen to, (104.7), the words fade into the background of the music. Thanks for the reply. I've been answering all types of emails today, it's like this site just sprang to life in all directions. I'm having so much fun being a member here.
Your very welcome I kinda feel the same way about it I'm having fun too, I even got the chance to meet someone who lived in the same area as me and we share our poem's and thoughts with each other, it's quite the right motivator to get your pen and right.
Joseph, Nice write! Terry Kay
Thank you Terry ??