Poem -
no surrender be.
Floating in a life raft,
Beneath the melancholy moon,
Awaiting the break in the tide,
Haunting memories ride,
Drowning within the oceans pride,
No surrender be,
Sunken beneath the depths of the sea.
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Comments
This is one of the poems I truly love for its breadth of interpretation.....
"drowning beneath the oceans pride........"
ahhh, just lovely for my ego driven imagination........
great write Nardine..........succinct.....tony
Thank you dearest Tony, happy to inspire, much love to you xx
Multiple sign of grief echoing within the verse,...very nice,...lovable theme.
Ravindra Kumar
Thank you Ravindra Kumar, for your comments sweetheart, much love to you xx
Excellent verses , i get drifted towards melancholies...
Love
Thank you princess, much love miss Piusha Singh xx
nardine sanderson,
Though short in lines, this is very touching, My love to the verse, Voted,
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you sir WILLIAMSJI , for your love of this write, much love Nardine xx