Poem -
Not a Bad Day After All
Leah comes when it rains,
sets my vision to her pleasant light
casts away clouds of discontent;
comforts me in words, so tender
wakes a song beyond foreboding
keeps my soul from self pity
though angry bows, stretch tight
the wicked arrows tense for flight;
they will fall, into the murky sea .
Leah comes when it rains,
and no dark and wicked thing
can ever touch me
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Hi Chris, lovely lines
"If Leah comes when it rains,
I'll see;
no dark and wicked thing could ever find me"
Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
hey Doc, cheers....I seem to be obsessed with the name `Leah` I`ve never known a Leah, but have used the name in a few poems, how weird is that....stay well, study hard
Thanks for sharing this immaculate composition !
The poems you have submitted to Cosmofunnel today really show your craft with the pen and your versatility ! Have thoroughly enjoyed them !
Warmest wishes to you ! :)
Richard, did I ever tell you how much of an egomaniac, I am, lol....thanks for not helping; Im kidding of cause, cheers pal, but honestly I`m just learning to write poetry, I want to be much much much better, trust me...
It is always wise to strive to get better at anything. Only way I find to improve at writing is to write. Practice makes perfect it is said !!! :)
Best wishes to you.
thanks sis, so appreciate the comment, you are amazing at commenting on a poem....cheers