Poem -
"NOT A DAY GOES BY" First Co-write by Curious Onlooker and Valerie Lynn
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You always cut me deep
When I'm already bleeding
I'm unable to fathom
The damage inflicted
For miles it stretches
You're barely receiving
This dark bred message
This pain that won't lessen
I'm trapped in this nightmare
Where the walls turn black
And suffocate slowly
I hold what is holy
For those enticing eyes
Are what draws me
Right back
And not a day goes by
Where you don't save me
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Comments
Hello Val and CO!
This Co-Write is Amazing...
You work it together so well...
Difficult for me to tell who said what...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank You Both for sharing
Thank you! We did a different format for a co-write which blended our thoughts together to create a poem that flows as one. Thank you for the comment and congrats on AOM!
Val ♥️
You are an inspiration and I love the energy and uniqueness you put into writes, I can't thank you enough for reading and enjoying my poems, if you are my fan than I'm yours X2, know that this poem was not only our words blended but our emotions as well and thats something special, thank you for being so enthusiatic and working with me on this, I would love to do it again, if it's okay
Curious
You just wrote everything I was thinking about you! You are an inspiration to me and I am honored to have the chance to write with you!! Yes! I would love to do it again!! Much Love to You!! ;)
Val ♥️
Thank You Val Very Much...
Hugs
sparrowsong
Goth meets God!!!!!!!...............wow!...........I would only like to reiterate............you two belong together........this was seamlessly delivered for a co-write...........and touched on the Un-done!!........you have a very unique voicing here............it's begging your readers for more...........I love the heart of this........the pain and the hope intertwined........beautifully delivered..............I LOVE you both!!.........well done you two...............kisses..............T xoxo