Poem -

NOVEMBER GIFT

NOVEMBER GIFT

Feeling wrapped up as if I'm a bull and there's a man on a horse with a rope...

If I do right...

The rope loosens...

I do wrong, it tightens...

Being pulled toward the right...

Left...

Right...

Getting dizzy...

I must remain on my feet...

I'm unable to stay still long enough to get a glimpse of the gate...

There has to be a way out...

I don't even remember getting here...

Another riddle?

Another lesson?

Angels watching...

Smiling...

They begin to laugh...

There's a chair...

Let us help you...

We're taking the rope off of you...

Did you have fun?

Not really...

They begin to frown...

I mean it was a real blast...

Whew!

They're smiling...

Someone needed to receive this November Gift...

You know who you are...

​​​​​​sparrowsong

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Hj

as you hear this message, it’s as if a gentle breeze sweeps across your soul, touching every fibre of your being.Β 

I felt that what was that ?? 😳😳

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Being Me

Lovely video!Β  And as for the poem, I think there's a lot who can empathise with what you are saying x

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Kristin Gudbjar...

Bravo, so much in that poem, the more you read it the more meaning it gets

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sparrowsong

Hello HJ...

​​​​Did it give you goosies?

​​​​​​Amazing right?

How many times did you listen to the video?

Pray first...

Pray for understanding...

​​​​​​The answer is in there...

Seek and ye shall find...

If you don't figure it out within 48 hours...

Let me know...

Hint: There's many things it could be...

Different things for different people...

It's a good thing...

Nothing to fear...

I've listened to it several times...

Thank you very much...

Best wishes and blessings

sparrowsong

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Neville

A most original and likewise, extremely compelling poem .. Now read several times in its entirety and although I may be a mile and a half wide, I believe I have uncovered just as many possible, if not entirely probable interpretations .. I just hope your middle name aint Nostradamus sparrowsong ..Β  NevilleΒ 

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sparrowsong

Hello Neville...

You are so funny!!

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Would you prefer Madusa?

Thank you for your kind comment and support...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Being Me...

I don't know if I will know if you're right...

If you are they'll know...

Great thought though...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Kristin...

Thank you very much for your time you gave to this...

Thank you for your very kind and generous comment and support...

Thank you for letting me know...

Best wishes and blessings...

sparrowsong

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