Oak Tree Concerto
In Light Of Said Events
I am the mirror to your reflection
Like Lingonberry seeds
screaming to dance
to the moonlight
of a midsummer night's
dream
so is the awaken contemplation
of Regret
Acid Reflux
invades slumber
as Hamlet's Ghost
acts as a conductor
to the symphony
of Apathy
The strings of Sorrow
drowns out the
flute of Joy
haunting the performance
of this motionless soul
on a Repetitious Soundtrack
In retrospect
Climbing up
too close to GOD
only caused
The Trees to Shake
Thus raining
Acorns of Melancholy
Upon this Concerto
It is the hope though
that since
the Composer is
the "Trinity Of Forgiveness"
a Kernel of this
fragmented residue
will take root,
forming a
Fortress of OAK
called "Redemption"...............................
Ā
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Comments
I love it Greg, have you posted it on NP? I get the Norse references, lingonberries and oak but it has a new magic of it's own. Great write.
Your mateĀ
Nigel.
Yes Nigel I posted it there. Thanks for readingĀ
WOW!! GREG!!....I wholeheartedly agree with ALL of the comments above....... the way you wove in the Shakespearean references in the beginning REALLY helped the surprising life & tone this took on.....I can see and feel how the spiritual aspect of this took your pen where IT wanted to go (don't you love it when that happens?)..... giving this write 'as a whole' a truly unique and glowing essence ......Like Tina .....I had to PIN this!!... it's truly original!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?ā“ā¤
Thank You Tony.Ā Yes It was something that took over on me.Ā Does not happen often.Ā A spiritual guide of sorts