OBSCURE ROSE
Precious petals, rare thorns
"Prohibited to Touch"
Ignoring such matters to get dramatic burns
Love that's shown that intrigues so much
Affection that is there when it hurts...
One's heart is a rose
A rose that opens red
Receiving what all life has to propose
"Frailty in Unity of it Soon Dead"
The new beginning of a prose
The prologue it creates in each stem
that is impossible to ignore
"Meraki Black Gem"
To define what's hidden in it's core
Smiling vines genuine
Cannot deny its dark essence
"The Black Butterfly"
Admiring her elegance
She is uniquely shy
But don't be deceived she is also dangerous
Water drops that look like diamonds
"Twinkles and Signals"
Life's mad laments
Many shattered many happy many individuals
Witnessing all that happens
"Her Midnight Dress"
That blooms at right full moon
Ready to impress and express
For that soul to take her doom
Relating and forgetting the rest
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Comments
Wow!! NANCY!!....this is VERY original!!...In many ways.....It has it the edginess of the picture you chose to represent it.....its uniqueness has its roots in the VERY clever phrasing that hints and glimmers over its delicateness....as though the words and the flower could shatter or wilt at any moment....pointing to the rarity of its nature......a nature I am not quite sure of!! BUT, for me, (having not read you before) It is the FORMATTING that sets it apart and provides a truly compelling foundation for it as a whole......You definitely have great skills with imagery and poetic timing......I look forward to reading more of your stuff dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....well done!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Awwww... Omg Thank you... I am flattered by your comment. I am honored that you love my poetry. I just wrote it late last night. Only cause I wanted to truly write an emo type poem and decided the rose a black rose to be precise. Words just popped in my head but visualizing the pictures too. I'm even amazed by how it came out. I everytime feel like a true writer and will continue writing and posting and once I can. I'll soon be creating a book on an app that's for poetry so can't wait. The theme will be about nature so anything relating that. It'll be my first book a hard cover one. I'll be reading your work as well my brother. I am truly happy you loved my writing. It means a lot especially this special day for my daughter now turned 11. So thank you so much..... 🙂🤗