Poem - 09 January 2015, 17:57 . Valerie Lynn . Like 0 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1486 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Demon Eyes Within Poetry Genre: Freestyle Tragedy 6 comments
AUTHOR WILLIAMS...09 January 2015, 18:12 Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn, Great write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote I am restless and reckless While the mirror plays tricks on me You want me to see what you seeĀ While scraping the flesh from my eyes Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
Valerie Lynn09 January 2015, 18:31 Thank you Williamsji!! I am so happy you commented on this poem as I was very hesitant to post it. I wasn't quite sure anyone would understand this one...so thank you for making my night!! Love Always, Val ā„ Reply
AUTHOR WILLIAMS...09 January 2015, 18:36 Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn, Inspired by the above, I shall be posting another four lines in " TWILIGHT MOODS " Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
AUTHOR WILLIAMS...09 January 2015, 18:44 I am restless and reckless while the mirror plays tricks on me you want me to see what you seeĀ while scraping the flesh from my eyes -Ā Valerie Lynn inspiring with the above, I wish to write as below: When I stretch out somewhere under shades of love, I shall no more assault your beautiful, celestial eyes, Nor the rainclouds makes lament by way of grief to pour in, When my memory fades, perishing my body and soul -Williamsji Maveli Reply
Valerie Lynn09 January 2015, 18:56 Wow that is true talent how quickly you can write a verse! You never cease to amaze me!! I love it!! ā„ Reply
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Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,
Great write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Williamsji!! I am so happy you commented on this poem as I was very hesitant to post it. I wasn't quite sure anyone would understand this one...so thank you for making my night!!
Love Always,
Val ā„
Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,
Inspired by the above, I shall be posting another four lines in " TWILIGHT MOODS "
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Aww awesome!! Thank you!!! ā„ ā„
inspiring with the above, I wish to write as below:
Wow that is true talent how quickly you can write a verse! You never cease to amaze me!! I love it!! ā„