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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,

Great write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote

I am restless and reckless
While the mirror plays tricks on me
You want me to see what you seeĀ 
While scraping the flesh from my eyes

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Williamsji!! I am so happy you commented on this poem as I was very hesitant to post it. I wasn't quite sure anyone would understand this one...so thank you for making my night!!

Love Always,

Val ♄

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,

Inspired by the above, I shall be posting another four lines in " TWILIGHT MOODS "

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Aww awesome!! Thank you!!! ♄ ♄

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

I am restless and reckless
while the mirror plays tricks on me
you want me to see what you seeĀ 
while scraping the flesh from my eyes

-Ā  Valerie Lynn

inspiring with the above, I wish to write as below:

When I stretch out somewhere under shades of love,

I shall no more assault your beautiful, celestial eyes,

Nor the rainclouds makes lament by way of grief to pour in,

When my memory fades, perishing my body and soul

-Williamsji Maveli

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Valerie Lynn

Wow that is true talent how quickly you can write a verse! You never cease to amaze me!! I love it!! ♄

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