THE ODD COUPLE

The Hedgehog and the Hare
Were different and unique
Hedgehog had a spiky back
The Hare was soft and sleek
Both of them were best of friends
Differences they didnât see
They were happy to be together
Enjoyed each others company!
But the creatures in the Forest
Were surprised at Hareâs strange choice
Hare was popular in the woods
But the Hedgehog had no voice
They thought of him as quite aloof
âPricklyâ and quite âslowâ
Hare was âmadâ and âboundingâ
But respect for him theyâd show
But the day their friendship happened
Was the day he helped Hare out
Of a sticky situation
Where Hedgehog held more clout
The woodland snake was quite a fiend
Heâd sidle through the grass
Watching with his beady eye
For any prey to pass
So when the Hare came scurrying up
In the undergrowth so thick
He didnât see the movement
Of this evil swirling stick
But the Hedgehog had been sitting
Underneath a bushy hedge
He saw the snake now slithering
And his body he did wedge
In the path of the mad Hare
As he came steaming in
The snake he pounced at both of them
Hedgehog pierced his leathery skin!
The snake recoiled with pain
And squirmed off into the distance
âOh Hedgehog, you were so brave
You saved me in this instanceâ
âWell hare you know I ainât as bad
As all the creatures say
I canât help the way I look you know!â
And he hung his head in dismay
The Hare he realised what theyâd done
And too felt great disgust
To judge someone on looks alone
Really wasnât just
I promise Hedgehog from now on
Youâll always be my friend
I was a fool in judging you
This is where my foolishness ends
So the Hedgehog and the Hare
Went on their merry way
Laughing; joking; having fun
And still are great friends to this day

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Comments
lovely little tale rachel of friendship x
Ahh, thanks Tracy, one for the kids lol!! :)
Rachel seriously this is a fantastic story/poem with a beautifful moral behind it, well done and a big vote from me X:)
Thanks Jason, one for the kids definitely, a lighter side of me lol!! :)xx
Plenty lessons to take in here
Well crafted and I see this in
book form with lovely pictures toÂ
match the story, Rachel you'veÂ
done a good job here, are there moreÂ
like this? Cute pic!Â
Best from Jai :)Â
Cheers Jai, glad you enjoyed. Â Love writing adult stuff but found a liking for writing for a younger audience too! Â Wrote one called 'Seasons Change' about a butterfly and an ant a few poems ago which also had a moral to its story!! Â Thanks for reading Jai :)
Jason do you have a take onÂ
Snow White!:) Disney will neverÂ
recover after Jason :)Â
Haha cheers Jai, I'll do a Snow White one just for you :)
thank you but pls leave Donald
alone, he's only a Duck!Â
Looking out for White :)
Jai, I hardly think Jason needs any encouragement lol!! Â I can feel a snow white ditty coming up very soon ha ha!!! :)
True Rachel, no encouragementÂ
neededÂ
ahum (goldilocks) not her too!Â
Jai needs encouraging RachelÂ
he is in the jungle of merrymentÂ
aka Indonesia where the monkeysÂ
swing ...
You're both encouragable ha ha!!! I look forward to Jason's next 'childrens' story LOL! :)
This is super cute! :-)
Ah, thanks Shannon, one to read to the kids lol!! :)
Lol!!! Â Maybe I could help, but I agree, give him a little longer I have a feeling another fairytale shocker may appear very soon ha ha ........ and they are becoming a bit of a guilty pleasure LOL!!!! :)
ah shucks Rachel cute lovely friendship poem congrats x
Thanks Susan, just trying a few different things at the minute, too much in a comfort zone and wanted to challenge myself a bit.  Doesn't always work but this one was for the kids; and god knows I have enough of them LOL!! :)
Me too Lily Mae, I have known my best friend since we were four, some 36 years lol!! Â We are different in many ways but best of friends. Â Good to have such great friends you can depend on! Â Glad I made you smile :)