Poem -
of all my loves
of all my loves
i have loved
i sit here asking where are you
for i dont know what to do
as i am dying thinking of you...
failed to hear and failed to see
blinded deaf i need you near
i am fragile on my feet
falling on my knees i weep
anymore seems like nothing more
without you cant go on
as my heart pains its way
sweeping me down
to every pulse ...
of all my loves i need you now
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Hi Lorris, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this one heaps love when you use this structure, forces me to stay engaged throughout. Love your talent. Kind regards the Fish of the Sea
O Thank you Fish of the Sea very much appreciated
Oh Lorris... This is sooo sad! Love is not a switch you can flick to off and it can end up hurting us so badly. But if there was such a switch then love would mean nothing. But all this hurting over unrequited love makes for some wonderfully indulgent poetry x
thank you Being me for liking this not many like my writes....thx for the support..
I think you write beautifully, Lorris, and in some cases uniquely, on matters of love. You have a distinct poetic voice... that is, I have been told, what makes a decent poet x
well thank you Being Me.... i really appreciate your comment....i do try to make it my own....thx you make me feel i am doing something worthy ....
Xx