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oF gRiEf

the walls melt
candy pink undulating
madness
pooling on floors, sticky pink
sadness
I try to save my slippers
but they are drowned 

M P 17/4/21

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Being Me

What a brilliant mind you have Marion! I love the way you have described your feelings here. I am so sorry that you are having such a tough time and I do hope and pray that the days get easier for you. This is a short poem that really packs a powerful shot of emotional imagery. Absolutely superb writing 😊 x

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Marion

It's what it's like Tina...nearly 5 months on and I can't get out of bed most days. I could never have understood before. Unfortunately my head wakes me up between 3-6 most mornings now and then I feel the urge to murder Cosmo...lol. Thanks love...you are always so kind ♥️

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Being Me

Bless you!  Our hearts and minds are so closely linked. A broken heart always, always = a broken mind. If ever you want you can always message me to talk about things. Always here for you. Hugs 🤗 x

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Marion

Hi Tina...catching up so you might get a bombardment of thank you's ...sorry. I know you are there love and it comforts me to know that...appreciated...hugs to you ♥️

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Marion

Aye...soggy as well 🤪💞😊

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Gwendoline

You have captured so much of that sinking madness grief can weigh onto us. And you did it in so few words. Amazing Marion. Although I wish in my heart you didn't have to write this. That things were different 

Hugs xx 

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