Poem -
Of Light
Already my Love is confiding in me
The secret hallways
Of her meandering, river-like
Eloquence,
On beauty and the light
With Love's potent
Aspects,
Where the reason for living
Exists,
And the river that runs through
Her existence
Pours holy water into my depths
With the alluring delight
In her fastidiousness
And compelling
Mysteriousness,
Of light...
Tony Taylor
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Your writes on love and relationship are compulsive reading. Your journey into the essence of a fulfilled heart providesΒ amble material for elegant exquisite poetry.
Love this.
Hug. Β :)
SIR WATERS!!.. Thank you for the most kind and helpful of comments!!.......I do SO look forward to them!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?
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This is beautiful Tony....you're always a pleasure to read!...High five boyfriend!...?
Thanx ROSE!!!...... you're so cool I'm gonna ask Santa to send you some mistletoe!! (smiles)......thanx again for this girlfriend!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Β ?
Tony this is a spectacular write. I have two new poems awaiting your wonderful critiques. I love all your comments as well as your talentedΒ work.
Thanx DARKLY.......I got you girlfriend...... just left one or two but I'll go back and check......thanx again for this sweetheart!!....... ttyl........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo.Β ?
My dear Brother Poet Tony,
And the Lord said, "Let There Be Light", and then, it illuminated your soul. Β The shining beauty of your mate igniting passion pure, and love so true. Β She is the completion of you.Β She is the reason you will live and bask together in the suns golden rays forever.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry
Hey Thanx LARRY!!.....I enjoyed the way you took the title and wrapped Cherie and I up inside of it ~ with such generous eloquence...... you my friend...... are a joy to fence with, learn from, and generally be sophisticated about our ongoing love affair!!Β LOL!!.......kisses......T xo.Β ?