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Tony Taylor

Wow!! MICHAEL!!....this is TRULY compelling!!......I didn't know if I should laugh or cry.......there is something VERY engaging about this piece.....it has a glow of true originality and could seriously be explored further for effect.....I had to PIN this......It's magical!!......thanx so much for sharing this!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo   : )

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Michael Champion

Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.
. Look after yourself.

M

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