Poem -
On Top of Old Bones
They once made out
in a cemetery
on top of old bones ..
Not for a bet
you understand,
or because it just so
happened
to be Halloween ..
But for the hell of it ..
To her, he meant
nothing at all ..
He was just some
crazy kid ..
While she, was his
number seventeen ..
And just another
short lived ghoul friend ..
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"Ghoul friend."Β Β Β Brilliant! Made me smile :) x
There are no flies on you I see .. thanks a million Tina x
You ate so welcome x
Hi Neville,
this isΒ Perfectly Halloweeny!!
I really enjoyedΒ
Lorna x
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I'm so glad you came by Lorna, many thanks Pet x
Ah...those meaningless encounters remembered only because fresh young memories remember everything...x
I have to write them down quick otherwise they are gone .. on reflection, I am sure that's why I write everything down .. ta Marion n truly .. your mate ME x
Found it at last, for I read it a while ago and didn't want let it slip away into the ether for it deserves recognition,
Nev, this is brilliantly conceived and written flawlessly in what you present and as always the how of how you say it.
Loved reading this and all it offers this happy poetry bunny.
Will be catching up on many more going to your new ones and doubling back for I'll be having a longer break soon and looking forward to it.
It's better to read guaranteed quality on here, than the same old crap on the TV this Christmas.
Thanks Nev and all good things to you and those closet to you my friend :)
The fact you obviously trawled back through a considerable number of my scribbles to get here (again) is not only embarrassingly encouraging but otherwise appreciated also ..
Many of my most heartfelt thanks Shaun and with Kindest Best Wishes to you and yours .. NevilleΒ