On Ya Bike!!

I'm looking through my window way beyond the skyline.
Iām dreaming of a future where one day youāre all mine
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I see you in the distance , youāre cycling down the lane
Iām feeling so lightheaded ācause Iām seeing you again.
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A summer Ā tan has touched you face and Ā slightly bronzed your arms.
In just a few more minutes Ā Iāll be captured by your charms.
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I hear the gate hinge creaking as you glide through on your bike.
I hope the gift you have for meĀ is Ā something I will like.
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A box all lined with velvet, āguess itās hidden in your pants.
Third finger of my left handĀ - Iām giving it a glance.
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Itās bare and looking lonely and needs a band of gold,
but first it needs a diamond -itās āde rigourā Iām told!
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You park the bike behind the shed then disappear inside.
I practiceĀ how my name sounds when Iām at last your bride.
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Where are you Ā gone my darling? Iām waiting patiently..
What are you doing in there? You should be here with me.
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I knew you were a rover and had a wandering eye,
but you swore that you loved me and would never make me cry
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And I believed, as good girls do, that I would be your Muse,
you said I was the only one on this earth you would choose.
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So here I am a quiver, not believing my good luck,
and never thinking that for you I was a willing ā¦.person
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He's coming out and looking flushed , his eyes are all a glister
and creeping out behind him, my younger, braless sister!!!
ok so the last few submissions have been a little dark..time to lighten up a little!
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Comments
I first read the end as "his younger braless sister" and got freaked out for a second haha
That made me laugh..maybe that might have been a unique ending!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and hope you enjoyed it
Lodigiana xxx
Hi HunĀ good stuff - a bit of light relief always good!Ā
Steviec xx
Enjoyable to readĀ
Hi Leah, thanks for reading, the last couple of poems have been a little heavy so wanted to lighten things a little. Pleased you enjoyed it xxx
Lodigiana
Betrayal. Broken dreams and shattered lives. A family torn apart. A main character so emotionally disfigured by her experiences that she'll never be able to trust anyone again...
If this is you lightening up a little...I'd hate to see you go full-tilt Jacobean revenge tragedy!!!
Your penchant for using the last line to kick the reader in the teeth knows no bounds!!
Funny, fiendishly clever and perfectly paced.
A joy!
J ;)
Hahaha, a Jacobean tragedy- now thereās a thought! Ā Thankfully I am just really ordinary and straightforward and happy..but over a lifetime Ā have had huge interactions with all sorts of not so lucky souls but with my writers head on I can and do become who I like or want to give a life to...maybe even a Lady Beth Mac!;) ....thanks for commenting and pleased you enjoyed it Jason.
Lodigiana