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On Ya Bike!!

On Ya Bike!!

I'm looking through my window way beyond the skyline.
I’m dreaming of a future where one day you’re all mine
 
I see you in the distance , you’re cycling down the lane
I’m feeling so lightheaded ‘cause I’m seeing you again.
 
A summer  tan has touched you face and  slightly bronzed your arms.
In just a few more minutes  I’ll be captured by your charms.
 
I hear the gate hinge creaking as you glide through on your bike.
I hope the gift you have for me  is  something I will like.
 
A box all lined with velvet, ‘guess it’s hidden in your pants.
Third finger of my left hand  - I’m giving it a glance.
 
It’s bare and looking lonely and needs a band of gold,
but first it needs a diamond -it’s ‘de rigour’ I’m told!
 
You park the bike behind the shed then disappear inside.
I practice  how my name sounds when I’m at last your bride.
 
Where are you  gone my darling? I’m waiting patiently..
What are you doing in there? You should be here with me.
 
I knew you were a rover and had a wandering eye,
but you swore that you loved me and would never make me cry
 
And I believed, as good girls do, that I would be your Muse,
you said I was the only one on this earth you would choose.
 
So here I am a quiver, not believing my good luck,
and never thinking that for you I was a willing ….person
 
He's coming out and looking flushed , his eyes are all a glister
and creeping out behind him, my younger, braless sister!!!

ok so the last few submissions have been a little dark..time to lighten up a little!
 
 
 
 

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Samuel Green

I first read the end as "his younger braless sister" and got freaked out for a second haha

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StevieC

That made me laugh..maybe that might have been a unique ending!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and hope you enjoyed it
Lodigiana xxx

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StevieC

Hi Hun  good stuff - a bit of light relief always good! 
Steviec xx

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lodigiana

Hi Leah, thanks for reading, the last couple of poems have been a little heavy so wanted to lighten things a little. Pleased you enjoyed it xxx
Lodigiana

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Jason Brown

Betrayal. Broken dreams and shattered lives. A family torn apart. A main character so emotionally disfigured by her experiences that she'll never be able to trust anyone again...

If this is you lightening up a little...I'd hate to see you go full-tilt Jacobean revenge tragedy!!!

Your penchant for using the last line to kick the reader in the teeth knows no bounds!!

Funny, fiendishly clever and perfectly paced.

A joy!

J ;)

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lodigiana

Hahaha, a Jacobean tragedy- now there’s a thought!  Thankfully I am just really ordinary and straightforward and happy..but over a lifetime  have had huge interactions with all sorts of not so lucky souls but with my writers head on I can and do become who I like or want to give a life to...maybe even a Lady Beth Mac!;) ....thanks for commenting and pleased you enjoyed it Jason.
Lodigiana

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