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On Ya Bike!!

On Ya Bike!!

I'm looking through my window way beyond the skyline.
I’m dreaming of a future where one day you’re all mine
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I see you in the distance , you’re cycling down the lane
I’m feeling so lightheaded ā€˜cause I’m seeing you again.
Ā 
A summer Ā tan has touched you face and Ā slightly bronzed your arms.
In just a few more minutes Ā I’ll be captured by your charms.
Ā 
I hear the gate hinge creaking as you glide through on your bike.
I hope the gift you have for meĀ  is Ā something I will like.
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A box all lined with velvet, ā€˜guess it’s hidden in your pants.
Third finger of my left handĀ  - I’m giving it a glance.
Ā 
It’s bare and looking lonely and needs a band of gold,
but first it needs a diamond -it’s ā€˜de rigour’ I’m told!
Ā 
You park the bike behind the shed then disappear inside.
I practiceĀ  how my name sounds when I’m at last your bride.
Ā 
Where are you Ā gone my darling? I’m waiting patiently..
What are you doing in there? You should be here with me.
Ā 
I knew you were a rover and had a wandering eye,
but you swore that you loved me and would never make me cry
Ā 
And I believed, as good girls do, that I would be your Muse,
you said I was the only one on this earth you would choose.
Ā 
So here I am a quiver, not believing my good luck,
and never thinking that for you I was a willing ….person
Ā 
He's coming out and looking flushed , his eyes are all a glister
and creeping out behind him, my younger, braless sister!!!

ok so the last few submissions have been a little dark..time to lighten up a little!
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Samuel Green

I first read the end as "his younger braless sister" and got freaked out for a second haha

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StevieC

That made me laugh..maybe that might have been a unique ending!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and hope you enjoyed it
Lodigiana xxx

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StevieC

Hi HunĀ  good stuff - a bit of light relief always good!Ā 
Steviec xx

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lodigiana

Hi Leah, thanks for reading, the last couple of poems have been a little heavy so wanted to lighten things a little. Pleased you enjoyed it xxx
Lodigiana

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Jason Brown

Betrayal. Broken dreams and shattered lives. A family torn apart. A main character so emotionally disfigured by her experiences that she'll never be able to trust anyone again...

If this is you lightening up a little...I'd hate to see you go full-tilt Jacobean revenge tragedy!!!

Your penchant for using the last line to kick the reader in the teeth knows no bounds!!

Funny, fiendishly clever and perfectly paced.

A joy!

J ;)

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lodigiana

Hahaha, a Jacobean tragedy- now there’s a thought! Ā Thankfully I am just really ordinary and straightforward and happy..but over a lifetime Ā have had huge interactions with all sorts of not so lucky souls but with my writers head on I can and do become who I like or want to give a life to...maybe even a Lady Beth Mac!;) ....thanks for commenting and pleased you enjoyed it Jason.
Lodigiana

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