Wow!! HANNA!!...... this is a stunning use of poetic prose....... gorgeous metering...... and the repetition in the carefully placed phrasing ~ "..let us be of the same color tonight.." ~ created a continuity that made for a lovely flow to the read itself....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS..... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo
Very powerful work. Reminiscent of my favorite poet, Neruda. You are very good and I mean that, I'm not just saying it to be nice or something like that... or to welcome you to the club. Heck, I'm new too.
Yes, Hanna, astonishing wordplay.. Ross, so true there is a touch of Neruda here, you have some captivating phrasing, very fresh....you're a talented one, that's for sure, liking this... the pull quote really raised my eyebrows, cheers
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Great imagery, a beautiful poem all around.
Thank you, kind man
Wow!! HANNA!!...... this is a stunning use of poetic prose....... gorgeous metering...... and the repetition in the carefully placed phrasing ~ "..let us be of the same color tonight.." ~ created a continuity that made for a lovely flow to the read itself....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS..... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo
Thank you! I appreciate it. I feel very welcome. :)
AMAZING, BREATH TAKING, GREAT, FANTASTIC, SHOW STOPPING, GROUND BREAKING, PERFECT
Thank you!!!!!!!! I love the enthusiasm!!
Sometimes a good girl wants to be bad and so do some good boys.
wonderful write. hope to read more soon
Very powerful work. Reminiscent of my favorite poet, Neruda. You are very good and I mean that, I'm not just saying it to be nice or something like that... or to welcome you to the club. Heck, I'm new too.
You captured something here. Keep writing!
Yes, Hanna, astonishing wordplay.. Ross, so true there is a touch of Neruda here, you have some captivating phrasing, very fresh....you're a talented one, that's for sure, liking this... the pull quote really raised my eyebrows, cheers
Come paint the rain with me,
please. Let's be of the same
colors tonight.
Hope you keep writing love both of your poems!