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Tony Taylor

Wow!! HANNA!!...... this is a stunning use of poetic prose....... gorgeous metering...... and the repetition in the carefully placed phrasing ~ "..let us be of the same color tonight.." ~ created a continuity that made for a lovely flow to the read itself....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS..... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo

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Hanna Harris

Thank you! I appreciate it. I feel very welcome. :)

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Elijah Thorn

AMAZING, BREATH TAKING, GREAT, FANTASTIC, SHOW STOPPING, GROUND BREAKING, PERFECT

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Hanna Harris

Thank you!!!!!!!! I love the enthusiasm!!

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Kimmy Alan

Sometimes a good girl wants to be bad and so do some good boys.

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Ross Hanna

Very powerful work. Reminiscent of my favorite poet, Neruda. You are very good and I mean that, I'm not just saying it to be nice or something like that... or to welcome you to the club. Heck, I'm new too.   

You captured something here. Keep writing!

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Christopher Correia

Yes, Hanna, astonishing wordplay.. Ross, so true there is a touch of Neruda here, you have some captivating phrasing, very fresh....you're a talented one, that's for sure, liking this... the pull quote really raised my eyebrows, cheers

Come paint the rain with me,

please. Let's be of the same

colors tonight.

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