Poem -

One Fine Day

One Fine Day

One fine day we met in the park
We stayed out together till after dark
We were a couple of school kids
So innocent & free
One fine day

We grew so close
We were more than friends
& We thought those days would never end
Coz Nothing mattered, It was only you & me
One fine day

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We embraced the sun, We were 
Two little children having such good fun
But I never thought that those days would bother me

I wanna go back to those happy times
When we made our own music with lyrics & rhymes
We were lost in our moment
And time was on our side
We walked by the river & we threw some stones
When we were together we were never alone
But those days are gone
And I’m left with just memories
One fine day

As time made us older
We just grew apart
But the memories linger
With you in my heart
And I often wonder Do you think of me
Or am I just a fool to be thinking of you
I should get on with my life and not be so blue
But I wanna go back to when we were young & free
One fine day

 

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Angel

Nicely written nice memory angel well expressed and poetic

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Jill Tait

Its my song luv Thank you Angel ❤️❤️❤️

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Cherie Leigh

Hi Jill...Oh to go back in time to those carefree days with our best friends enjoying just being alive and loved.....That is a fine memory to have and to want to return to in order to feel that beauty.  I love it!  ox ;) 

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Jill Tait

Awww its one of my songs luv Thank you Cherie 💕💕💕

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Greg Etsell

8 poems in one day wow 
I CANT DO THAT how 
can you do thatt

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Jill Tait

Dunno i just find them easy I guess but not sure how xxxxx

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al Bikaadi

WOW! I was so fortunate to reunite with my childhood bestie not so long ago (after 20 plus years). What a special thing it is to have such memories! ❤ We used to sneak away with her parent's canoe and boat down Parramatta River, truant school and go snorkeling at the beaches around Cronulla, things like that. What a blessing it was for both of us at a difficult time in our lives to be able to "escape" for a bit and create our own little utopia. Lol

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Jill Tait

Awww just like my song ❤️Aww that’s lovely of you sharing this with me Thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️

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