Poem -
One in the Same
The sun is bright
but so is the moon.Β
Day and night
come and go to soon.
Each are the same
yet they're not.
They both have a name
and tie the knot.
Never ending
they fade into one.
Never beginning
because it's already done.Β
Both are connected
they'll never part.
Both are protected
by each others heart.Β
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
totally gorgeous write Lily. I am floored by your talent.
I actually wrote this over a year ago and found it in one of my notebooks full of random stanzas of poetry. Thank you for your kind words, knowing someone enjoys my work means so much to me! :)Β
xxxLilyΒ
Hey LILY !!..this has such style.......I think I've said this to you before...... your stuff is so unique that it stands out because of its formatting and delivery........I like the way you juxtapose light and dark here........VERY compelling ........ALL STARS......... well done....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!....TΒ xo.Β ?
You said it one the very first poem of mine you read I believe! Which made me extremely happy because I've never received such praise. Everyone here lately has made me so much more confident in myself. I'm glad you liked it!! :)Β
xxxLilyΒ
How clever to write of the sun
and moon
really loved this poem LilyΒ
your poetry is musical songwritingΒ
poetry I enjoy every muchΒ
best wishes from Jai:)