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One minute God

One minute God

One minute 
Blood pumping 
Next minute 
Not 
One minute 
 A bloody good thumping 
Next minute 
Clot 
  One minute on the tracks 
Next minute 
  ......a blot 
One day upon the ground 
Next day, not 
For the Lord is thy shepherd 
  As the mountains upon the earth 
The blue of the sky 
   One minute 
God 

 

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Dean Kuch

We’re all awesome, right? Well, I mean we didn’t create the world or anything like that, but I think most of us pretty much have it going on. However, there can be some negative aspects of being creative. Creative people can sometimes struggle with mild cases of the God Complex.
The God complex is defined as a psychological state of mind in which a person believes that they have supernatural powers or god-like abilities. The person generally believes they are above the rules of society and should be given special consideration.
Some might call people such as these Narcissists.
Do we honestly think we’re a deity, or even better than everyone? No. But some creative people are quite susceptible to picking up at least a few of the aspects of the God complex.
Nice write, Jai...
~Dean

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Jai Masters

What analysis! 
   Geez my poem trigger a bloody 
 good narrative 
   When can we do coffee ☕️?:))
 thank you Dean. 

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